Here is the 'crowd' scene I drew that I talked about in my last post. I think each group of people look good on their own but as a whole piece it doesn't really work because of all the empty space and the awkward positioning of the groups in relation to each other. I was talking about my issues with this piece with Gill and she thinks the piece may be saved if I add another figure or two on the right hand side but more in the foreground this time or alternatively if I crop the right hand side to end at the last figure to form a more obvious sort of wedge shape with the figures and thus give  some reason as to why the figures are in such seemingly weird and awkward positions on the page.
If neither of these ideas work I may try some sort of abstract background and if that doesn't work I may cut the groups out to play around with in other ways. I also just wanted to say that I really like the central 3 figures and how they work with the building inside them.